ONE STORMY DAY

One stormy day

There was a girl name Maria in Mexico she was that Cain of girl that that likes scaring people every time she saw somebody she all ways snick back and scare them one day there was this old woman that she all ways scare she had hart problems and one Stormy day she was so sick and tire then maria went in back of her and and bu,bu. She suddenly fell in the Flore maria was like what happening and felt so scare she just ran and ran she never came back and people say that the spirit of the woman be hunting in stormy day colling out for maria maria.

Reader Response 3

The Afterlife
by Gary Soto
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Ring, ring....the phone rang they were calling Chuy parents in Mexico. Chuy was thinking how his parent are going to act wen they her that he is dead that his mom will be screaming at the phone caring for him and his dad just the in the coach craing.he couldn't understand what was going on he was a ghost and couldn't talk arown people if he talk hill trow some cold are and if he tray to brave something his hand pass trow it.Chuy was passing buy a st. and saw a police man holding a cholo. the police could fill his presence the man cold see him the cop was inprece. later on the cop let the cholo free. theradio cop picked up the call the cop he was in a hurry and the police man told chuy to go in the car.

blog post #2(Title "Reading Reaponse: Question)

Obama Counts on the Youth

FAT QUESTION
Why every on is so mad and scare about the economic?
Why do young peoples vote matter a lot?
Why is Obama train to persuade the young people?

SKINNY QUESTIONS
What are they talking about?
Why Obama came to Michigan?

Why dose he lucks so confident?

Post #1:Titled 'RAFT:This Land Is Your Land'

Question:
How does the information in the box "A Day in the life (of me!)" help the understand the article?

The information in the box help he understand the story better by explaining what she doses in her day and like at what time she eats. I think she is very healthy and strong because she stretch and eat two times a day. She mostly have a normal life she plays guitar and did most things we do but I think I wont survive there without T.V and more, without all of that technology i will get bored.

Reader Response 2

The afterlife
by Gary Soto
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Time pass and suddenly a man came in and got so scare he went outside swimming Julio Julio like he was the on hurt. Julio came and call the ambulance , the ambulance came and toke his body. The police came and talk to the manager and said am sorry.I think they close the place so they cold investigate. Chuy felt were like if he was flying he cold touch the selling he was not mad at no one not even with the man with yellow shows. What I think is going to happen next is that he is going to try to get revenge .

Reader Response 1

The afterlife
by Gary Soto

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My book is about this boy that has a ordinary life like most of the teens in high school go to party's ,club's and more. It was a special day for him because he was going to spend time with Rachel, this girl he likes. He was going out to dance that day with her. He was so ready to go but then some thing different happen he wanted to go to the bathroom. But he didn't know that he was going to get kill. They stab him in his stomach and know he is waiting for somebody to help him but he doesn't hurt or nothing he fells like nothing have happened.