Reader Response 3

The Afterlife
by Gary Soto
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Ring, ring....the phone rang they were calling Chuy parents in Mexico. Chuy was thinking how his parent are going to act wen they her that he is dead that his mom will be screaming at the phone caring for him and his dad just the in the coach craing.he couldn't understand what was going on he was a ghost and couldn't talk arown people if he talk hill trow some cold are and if he tray to brave something his hand pass trow it.Chuy was passing buy a st. and saw a police man holding a cholo. the police could fill his presence the man cold see him the cop was inprece. later on the cop let the cholo free. theradio cop picked up the call the cop he was in a hurry and the police man told chuy to go in the car.