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Tuesday, November 11, 2008

Reader Response 5

The after life
by gary Soto
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Chuy was walking in the mall we he saw the man with the yellow shows from the other night the man that stab him two times the one that has kill him. Chuy was so mad wen he saw him he started to breath in him with his cold breath the man with the yellow shows cold fill his presence Chuy keep on breathing on him. The man saw the cops and started to run wen he saw a gurbish bag he put the niff with Chuy blood was from the day he kill him. Chuy kept on following the man with the yellow shows and and herd him talking to this men call Fausto he kinda of remembers this boy from middle school how use to bully the kids and take there money until one day he bully this boy that was good at marshal arts and bit him up. Her follow the man to his house were he saw his that the were allot of bicycles that were stolen and then saw Fauto the boy from middle school he luck different overweight there the two mans started fighting Chuy her that the man with the yellow shows was name Chuy and him later on he left. He went to see this girl that he liked there he started to notes that he was fating away.

1 comments:

Anais said...

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