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Sunday, November 9, 2008

Reader Response 4

The after life
Gary Soto
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The police car was taking him to a building were they went in there was this man a woman and little kid the police was very strict with him they were cursing to him and more telling him that "this is the last visit we are going you the next time we are going to take you."He was very scare. chuy saw in the news paper a picture of him that he had die in a bathroom he was high school student and more he started to cry because he saw that his carnal or his friend angel had written some thing he was starting to cry. He wanted to go visit him so he went but the wine was so hard that tuck him to china town were he saw some borrachos so me drunk man's and the dug he saw before. the wine blew again and tuck him in the direction were angels house was the he saw his best friends crying in the yard. He call angel out but he couldn't here him angel cold fill his presence and said what the hell he couldn't understand that he is seen his best friend chuy was so inpatient because he couldn't talk. Angel was telling him how he misses him and all the memo rice that he remembers wen use to like that girl from room34 name Maya Ramirez and fight over her because she had smile at one of the.

2 comments:

Jason Levy said...

Hi Maria,

I liked how you used quotations from your book in your blog post. Remember to use past tense for verbs, for example: "He called" Angel.

Keep Blogging!

-Mr. Levy

Anais said...

I liked this reading response journal because it is very good. But you need to watch out for grammar