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Monday, April 27, 2009

Introducing Documentaries

What they need to do to make this documentary is people that could help and act to understand the story explain problems that many people think is is nothing that matter but could become a big problem. Some element that I noticed that were used in this documentary is the emotional music and the colors that where use they film different places and there where good acting kind of. My favorite part is when the boy shut him self because it was so emotional it was the most important thing and is was good how the story was in black and white and then when he shut him self it was in color and that explain that when he shut him self peace came to his life.If I could make this story all over i will get the actors to put a Lil more of emotion in the story.Well this response to documentaries different than other I response to a book or newspaper because in this move it explain things like it could really happen and in a book or a newspaper they exaggerate in most story and make thing different and tell it in a different way.

Wednesday, April 22, 2009


Well I could connect this with slavery time because most of the people will get in hiding from the white man in another person house so they could get to a place of freedom but the people that hide them could get in allot of trouble. And Anne and her family are hiding expecting for the war to finish so the could come out of there hiding , live free and not going to a camping convention like the people that are hiding Anne Frank could get kill.
One main thing that Anne frank did and I will do is write in my diary because there was so much drama in the attic that she could not scream out what she feels.Most of all because if they make allot of noise the people that live up there could hire them and snitch on them.One of the main thing that I will write on my diary, is because is like talking to a friend that you wont see in a long time or will never see like Anne.
One of the funniest thing is when Peter drop the been and they all fell down in Anne frank and it look like a island in the middle of the sea of beans.
Well I think this book is a very interesting and there allot of drama with Anne and her mom this book is good and makes you feel like you there with her with all that problems but yes I will recommend this book .


Thursday, March 26, 2009

my story

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Ting..ting...
.Dark stormy day last night no time left to go to sleep my hair is like a nest all up and no time to put it down. Every one keeps on making fun of me and looking at me with some eyes that makes me feel like if this is not going that well and something real bad is going to happen.
oh great!! Gym next need to sweat, playing all day but every one keep on hitting me in the head with the balls I feel like pop-ping one boy or girl that get in my way. I keep on walking.

My friend comes and ask me ''what happen?"
I say "nothing this day is not my day"
"WHY?"she ask
"and more because of what happen that night?"i said it with a sad sound in her voice.

In that night of November 12 was a fun day the party was so hot and a lot of boy where trying to dance with me. But I only pick the cute ones. But there was this boy that kept on looking at me like if I was the last Coca-Cola in the Store I didn't like that and that kept on scaring me. When the party was getting good I just dissuaded to leave because I didn't like the way the boy kept on looking at me.But then in the way home I hoard something in back of me. I kept on walking more fast and herd the step going more faster than mines.

Tuesday, March 17, 2009

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Well i think that theres going to be some problems because there 7 people in that small room and they all ways there so they could stress out and that is how problems start. Well i could connect with this story because if i was her i wold hide from the bad people so i wont die.Well i like all the people for now but the one that Anna frank is family don't like is Mr.Goudsmit.

Friday, March 13, 2009

Anne frank

Tuesday, March 3, 2009


Alice Walker started with poems in 1952 to 2005. She bin though the Civil right Movement, the Independence Day, and Vietnam War in her life. Alice Walker she express her self in different kind of ways. When I start to read her story poem is like if i was in a world that had different means.I think she is very good in poem because she bin though to many thing in life. she write her poem very short but she express her self very well and

Thursday, February 26, 2009

Remember


The theme of this sonnet is to not for get the people you love.The clues gave away the theme was that the repeat REMEMBER me when..This message connect to my own life because they I will like for people to not for get me and have me in there heart. I could connect to my poem because it talk about a boy I like and that I can't for get him and get him of my mind.

Tuesday, February 24, 2009

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The theme of this poem is that if people talk or think of her in a bad way she still rises no matter what.An this poet teaches a lesson is that don't care what people think about you don't every give up in you're self no matter what to perseverance .I can connect to this theme when people talk about me is because they don't have no life and the like to tall about you because there are train to take you down and for you to give up.

Monday, February 16, 2009

Title:November blues
by:Sharon M. Draper
page50-258


This book is very interesting in page 50-258 has happen that November going to have a baby girl she is very happy and confuse at the same time .Josh parent the girls boyfriends parent want to take care of the girls baby and adopt it. She don't know what to do because if she gives it away she feels like she is selling her baby, and she feels like giving it away because the baby will have more opportunities with josh parent because they are rich and if she gives away her babe the will pay all he college for 4 years and they will give her extra money for her.They gave her some time to think and will she was thinking Jericho her friend the cousin of Josh was helping her if she need help but in the summer he was practising for football for a game the time know they where going to loose but they still practice.When they practice Olivia practice band too so when the practice finish Jericho gave Olivia a rides home.Jericho sees Olivia as a friend only because she is fat.Olivia is starting to see Jericho with other intention but she thing that Jericho will never like her because she is fat. The day of the gave Jericho and his friend had a good time in the hotel but.They had new uniforms that they sold them to the chip. It started to rain half of the gave they where winning 8-0. But when they went to the locker for rest they saw that there uniform turn pink that is why they sold them chip to them when the other half of the game came every one was laughing about the uniform they where so embarrass they lost 28-8.

Thursday, February 12, 2009

Homework! Oh, Homework!

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The hyperbole did you find in this poem is exaggeration because he makes a lot of exaggeration for example he says If only a bomb would explode you to bits is that he want to get ride of the homework so bad that he could do any thing to forget about it.The poet used hyperbole this way because he is train to convince the user that he don't like the homework.

Monday, February 9, 2009

Dreams



This poem makes me feel that dreams can come true if you hold on to them.Mostly because now we have a roll model name Barack Obama that show us that all dreams could come true in any kind of circumstance you are in if you are poor or rich or old and younger everyone dreams could come true if you put some effort in it and never give up.This poem makes me feel that dreams can come true if you hold on to them and don't let them go.This poem makes me feel like if i have a dream i could make it come true if you do you are best.The poet wrote this poem to make us more perseverance and work on aware dreams.

Friday, February 6, 2009

Bronx Masquerade #2

Chankara Troupe

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Chankara is a girl that is starting to get hit by her boyfriend because he was getting to tochi, tochi. This is the first time she get hit by him and she wont let it happen again because she don't want to be like her sister that always get hit by her boyfriend.I could infer that her sister is scare of her boyfriend mite do something to them because she don't break up with him. And she even made a poem about how she feels about the souvenir there boy friend gives them and she explain that her sister every time she comes tell her that her skin is bruise easily an she explain that she like to spread that sugar around and that means that sugar represent all the lies she makes.

Thursday, February 5, 2009

poetry responses to Bronx Masquerade

Attendance

I think the boy don't really care because he don't go to school. I have learn that he is don't what to waste no time in school and have fun because you don't know when you going to die. The poetry reveal about him that he what to have fun until he dies. One thing that don't describes him is perseverance because his dad go shot in McDonald and that is what is stopping him from making his life better. Two words that describes him is that don't care about school because he don't go to school and has pore attendance.

Monday, February 2, 2009



The inferences i could make is that he love and admire the way his dad hand are.The poet feel very happy that he has the same hand as his dad. The meaning of this poem is that he is proud to have black hands like his dad .Yes, I could connect with this poem because I'm proud of be Mexican and nobody could change it and if they don't like it oh well because that is the way I am, and I'm proud of be in the way i am.

Thursday, January 29, 2009

Do not go gentle into that good night

The message of this poem is to never give up.The mood that it create is sadness in this below because the men had die and the light two.

And you, my father, there on the sad height,
Curse, bless, me now with your fierce tears, I pray.
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

The poet uses repetion to create a mood in the reader. Other poetic device is used
smile.

Monday, January 26, 2009

Title:November blues
by:Sharon M. Draper
page28-50

In this part of the story the girl tell her mom that and he is going to the library but she is not she is going to get her self check up to see how the Bebe is and to see how long she bin pregnant.The start to talk to the doctor and tell her all about it she is getting confident and the Doctor is telling her all about the baby that its already developing in her stomach she is so so price and the Doctor is telling her how to treat her self.the doctor keep on telling her to tell her mom so that her mom will help he will she is pregnant.When she went home she saw her mom in the table and sate next to her and started talking to her and telling her that she was pregnant. Her mom was shock and didn't know what to do she ask her how long she was pregnant and she said 3 month and she said why didn't she tuck care of her self and she said she didn't know every thing happen so fast.But then her mom told her that they where going to get over it together

Title: November Blues
By: Shanron M. Draper
page:22-28


In this part of the story is about this the cousin of josh that was when the accident happen and feels guilty because josh def because he was there and was influence him to jump out of the 2 Floor building .And know he don't know what to do because he is train to get over the def of his cousin so he is tinking about plaing in the football game. When he pass bie the hallway this ex girlfriend makes fon of hi with this othere kid and he feels sad so he just walk away then when he is walking he bumps in to OHLIVIA and they start talking when they are ping up the books and they talking and that made Jericho much better.

reader response

Title: November Blues
By: Shanron M. Draper
page:1-22

This story is about this girl that is sad because of this boy at the beginning but then she start telling her friend that think she really didn't love the boy name josh but she is not really shore. Josh die and he just left something behind he left a gift from god a kid. November don't remember but she is having all the Simthomes. She is scare of what her mom will say and what will josh parent will say about his only grandson.She feel so different know that josh die she feel like every one of her friends feel bad for her.The next day she when to school she was walking to the bus and then a reported come to her and ask her all about it and she just try to walk away but the man don't live her alone finely she get to her school and she start to fill sick she runs to the bathroom and start to trow up then she hires this voice and is this girl from class who thinks November is really cool and she ask he if she is OK and November say yes. The girl ask her if she was pregnant and November say no and then says OK I'm ma tell you but don't tell nobody and then the girl tell November she need to go and gives November her number.

The man that will give change

Obama is the man
that want change
who expect change from us
and us from him
he will make change that many people expect
The men how understand what we are going trow
The man that will change the way we live
he will make change and
change he will make
Change is made November 4 he is elected
and that is change the first African American to be president

"yes we can "

Friday, January 23, 2009

Inaugural Poem

The title "Praise Song for the Day" means singing for the people that die for us and suffer for us.The poem make me feel sad because many people suffer for us to be free and still now there allot of racism but i thing with this new president there will be change.For example, in this line of this poem it explain that we sing for the people that had die before us and give oner of the people that gave there life for us.
"
Say it plain: that many have died for this day.
Sing the names of the dead who brought us here,
who laid the train tracks, raised the bridge"